Pitch Feedback

While  presenting our idea to the class I was feeling really nervous however half way I got comfortable and this activity really helped to gain more confident talking about my work also to apply critics in order to improve.

• As the mise-en-scene of the group I realised that I did not do enough research on the location so  I guess I need to do more research for the location and find a shop where we can film.
• the idea behind the costume is supporting how media portray young black/Arabic teen boys (hoody, timberlands, black backpack (carrying weapon or drugs) 
• most films will show teens boys planning to steal phones or sport wear
• we challenge that by planning to steal jewels
• planning the heist professionally might seem unusual to some viewers because we expect to see teen boys planning to steal something in a park or on the road

(written by Emmanuella )