Blogging Health Check 2

From this health check, I have noticed that there is a wide possible range of features in my blog that i have to improve upon; The most obvious being a lack of diverse use of technology. This is what i will be extremely focusing on going forward and backwards in my blog. Furthermore, i will complete blogs 18 and 29 in order to make up for lost marks as well as post sufficent pitch feedback and action points, I can improve from. I will also go much more in depth when analysing the filming/editing evidence as well as how successful the shots and the editing was. Finally, I will look at the audience feedback that i obtain from my rough cut and improve upon anything that they have said.